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New Song (fans of Depeche, NIN type stuff I guess?)
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Re: New Song (fans of Depeche, NIN type stuff I guess?)
I really enjoyed listening to this! I liked what you have done here....I would think about doing something different though at about the 2:14 mark. For some reason I thought that really didn't work well with the rest of song. Overall though, great song....Thanks for posting it! 

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Re: New Song (fans of Depeche, NIN type stuff I guess?)
Any chance of a post edit where you use the SoundCloud tags? I’ve got a browser issue that many seem to have where I can’t play a SC post on their website directly.
thanks,
Ian
thanks,
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Re: New Song (fans of Depeche, NIN type stuff I guess?)
Sure you go and thanks for the feedback KRZEPPA. I also posted a new track (unmixed) i'm working on called (undeniable). I got fix it up a little, I know it has to much reverb on everything...but you can get the idea I guess.
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Re: New Song (fans of Depeche, NIN type stuff I guess?)
Thanks for that. I liked Destruction-Delusion a lot. I have one critique and one suggestion: first, allow some dynamics into the recording - the tone of the song would be supported by this, and I think the timbres were somewhat hampered by the lack of dynamics. Less compression and/or levelling, please. The suggestion: consider other arrangements. For example (reorder/arrange based on times noted):
0:00 - 0:18 - intro
0:58 - 2:15 - verse/chorus
0:18 - 1:52 - slight breakdown-verse/chorus
(middle 8)
2:23 - 2:39 - shorten to 4 bars - middle section
2:55 - 3:11 - keep, then right into
(end middle 8)
3:15 - end
I’ll do more of a headphone listen later today.
cheers,
Ian
0:00 - 0:18 - intro
0:58 - 2:15 - verse/chorus
0:18 - 1:52 - slight breakdown-verse/chorus
(middle 8)
2:23 - 2:39 - shorten to 4 bars - middle section
2:55 - 3:11 - keep, then right into
(end middle 8)
3:15 - end
I’ll do more of a headphone listen later today.
cheers,
Ian
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Re: New Song (fans of Depeche, NIN type stuff I guess?)
Thanks Ian, I really appreciate the feedback and time you took to listen. All good things.
Re: New Song (fans of Depeche, NIN type stuff I guess?)
Both of these songs are very good....I quite like them a lot.
I almost wish I had some criticism for you, but sadly I don't.
I almost wish I had some criticism for you, but sadly I don't.

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Re: New Song (fans of Depeche, NIN type stuff I guess?)
Thanks for listening, i appreciate it! I'm glad you enjoyed the songs.