Rock song w/synth elements. Advice?

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Jaxamillian
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Rock song w/synth elements. Advice?

Post by Jaxamillian » Tue Sep 20, 2011 7:59 pm

http://soundcloud.com/justin-amos/electric-emily

How did it turn out? I can never tell after recording and listening to it...is it interesting? Is it fun to listen too....what do you hear that I can improve?

Thaks.

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Re: Rock song w/synth elements. Advice?

Post by optimus prime » Tue Sep 20, 2011 8:29 pm

Is this about a piece of equipment? Sounds like it's about a guitar amp or something...

The vocals are still a bit loud, bit it's a lot better than the previous track you posted, and I'd say the mix is better overall. Less synths though. One thing bothers me a bit, why do you keep those few seconds of noise in the beginning?

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Re: Rock song w/synth elements. Advice?

Post by Jaxamillian » Tue Sep 20, 2011 10:26 pm

It's about a girl

Thanks for listening, man.

About the noise in the beginning- I just never really bothered with it.

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