Umm.. Hello mr. Forum. Are you still depressed?

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Umm.. Hello mr. Forum. Are you still depressed?

Post by konvert » Wed Mar 15, 2006 10:01 am

Ok, the track is ready now.

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Post by Mush » Wed Mar 15, 2006 10:06 am

Add some distortion to the main bleeping bass when the 303-line comes in to make some contrast - otherwise it sound okay.

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Post by konvert » Wed Mar 15, 2006 10:29 am

Good idea, thanks. I'll try that.

303? Oh dear lord, I do not want it to sound 303. Major reworking ahead..
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Post by reptar » Wed Mar 15, 2006 2:46 pm

I liked it a lot. No suggestions, it's not really my genre but I heard no cheesy 303 that offended me at all.

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Post by GeneralBigbag » Wed Mar 15, 2006 6:25 pm

To be be honest, I think the drums don't quite fit with the rest of the piece, I don't mean the style (they make me think AFX) , but the rhythm, I didn't feel they interlocked with the melodic parts.

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Post by konvert » Wed Mar 15, 2006 7:37 pm

Thanks guys. I will have to look the drums also. Although I like them, they could use some shaping.
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Re: Umm.. Hello mr. Forum. Are you still depressed?

Post by Thefumigator » Fri Mar 17, 2006 2:46 am

konvert wrote: Here's a new piece I'm working on at the moment. I'd very much appreciate your thoughts about this. (I know that the melodies are.. eh. :roll: 'wild' )
wild?, I would say randomic :D Buts its a very gentle electronic tune, like made in space. I don't see nothing too wrong with the drums, also I think its the lead synth that in a point starts being a little bit annoying in my opinion. Somehow it reminds me to Yello, many of their last albums sounded like this.

In the strong side, I would point the rythm, its very electronic, and gentle. Then the rest, well, it depends on everyone. That said I would like to hear more tunes of yours. :wink: :D
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Post by Radio24 » Fri Mar 17, 2006 3:01 am

I actually really like the drums with this piece- contrary to what clubbed said. It might not fall perfectly in place- but i like it that way. I really liked the pitch sweep on the drums aas they came back in around 3:55. Overall, very nice.
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Post by konvert » Thu Mar 23, 2006 3:49 pm

Oooookay... Track is ready.
I edited the first post, you can find the link there.
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Post by haaplaj » Fri Mar 24, 2006 6:15 pm

Whoa man!

I'm quite impressed of that mixing work, I like the stereo image in this!
Quite much all kinds of percussivelike sounds and noises.
It makes it more interesting.
Rhythm turns group of sounds in to music.
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Post by tunedLow » Sun Mar 26, 2006 8:30 am

Very cool track. I like the 303ish line too. Nice beats, it breaks down enough to keep it interesting. Thanks for posting that.

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