Thanks for sharing. It's tough to get people to listen, these days. Comments are often harsh or dishonest. We all need to be constructive to be successful. The music has a great 80's type vibe. Well done! Really like the feel.
The Autotune style vocals. They are an artistic choice. Do they work with this piece? I only bring it up because it seems like two different parallel vibes. If thats you're goal, it's your artistic vision. Go for it!
The only thing I would add is maybe a little vocal VOL bump or thickness. I know thats a tough thing to do when you are mixing your own voice. I, personally, am always trying to mix my vocals as Low as I reasonably can.
Regardless, keep at it! I think it shows a lot of promise & practicing your art only helps you perfect it.
