To be be honest, I think the drums don't quite fit with the rest of the piece, I don't mean the style (they make me think AFX) , but the rhythm, I didn't feel they interlocked with the melodic parts.
konvert wrote:
Here's a new piece I'm working on at the moment. I'd very much appreciate your thoughts about this. (I know that the melodies are.. eh. 'wild' )
wild?, I would say randomic Buts its a very gentle electronic tune, like made in space. I don't see nothing too wrong with the drums, also I think its the lead synth that in a point starts being a little bit annoying in my opinion. Somehow it reminds me to Yello, many of their last albums sounded like this.
In the strong side, I would point the rythm, its very electronic, and gentle. Then the rest, well, it depends on everyone. That said I would like to hear more tunes of yours.
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-Maybe. But if we die, we're gonna die walking.
I actually really like the drums with this piece- contrary to what clubbed said. It might not fall perfectly in place- but i like it that way. I really liked the pitch sweep on the drums aas they came back in around 3:55. Overall, very nice.
I'm quite impressed of that mixing work, I like the stereo image in this!
Quite much all kinds of percussivelike sounds and noises.
It makes it more interesting.