melancholic ambient
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ned-ryarson
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Re: melancholic ambient
Nice chord progression and sounds in there, was nice to listen to. I just hear it as a chorus theme and would suggest you divide it up with some breaks or variation in the music...?
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ned-ryarson
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Re: melancholic ambient
absolutely.. just a melody idea.. it certainly needs another melody, as a verse or whatever.. this version has a bit of a bridge around 2.11 and is more enjoyable.. drums toward the end too.. it still probably needs what you said though!
http://www.yousendit.com/download/RmNER ... SWRMWEE9PQ
http://www.yousendit.com/download/RmNER ... SWRMWEE9PQ
Re: melancholic ambient
Yeah, better with the drums, pan out in the stereo field a bit more...?
Still like the theme (particularly the sweeping background sound) but would have a much better impact without the repitition and/or something else dividing it up... maybe some different sounds..? Just a thought.
Keep at it, got something to develop nicely there.
Still like the theme (particularly the sweeping background sound) but would have a much better impact without the repitition and/or something else dividing it up... maybe some different sounds..? Just a thought.
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ned-ryarson
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Re: melancholic ambient
yeah.. the drums are really basic sounding. ill have to layer some more percussive hits or something
whole thing was made in reason, without even a controller keyboard.. i love that maelstrom synth, for modulation.. so many crazy shapes to mess with.. such a fun synth to use
whole thing was made in reason, without even a controller keyboard.. i love that maelstrom synth, for modulation.. so many crazy shapes to mess with.. such a fun synth to use
